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Pain
I would like to confide
the pain inside
the pain I would like to reside
the pain that will lead to suicide
The pain inside
My broken heart
That will never start and never stop
Maybe I was just a prop
This is the end
I don't know why
Maybe I just wasn't part of the trend
the pain inside
the pain I would like to reside
the pain that will lead to suicide
The pain inside
My broken heart
That will never start and never stop
Maybe I was just a prop
This is the end
I don't know why
Maybe I just wasn't part of the trend
Published 7th Jun 2012
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7th Jun 2012 2:25pm
7th Jun 2012 2:29pm
Nice, I've been thinking the same things....except for the suicide. That's too extensive for me... Otherwise nice poem... :)
7th Jun 2012 3:40pm
The last two lines are opposed to the feeling of the rest of the poem. Actually - jars with the rest and sets the 'A needed loss' line adrift unconnected emotionally to the previous presence. It becomes to pragmatic and thus I felt, it fell down.
