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A night to remember
We went out to eat
Food that can't be beat
We spent some time talking
And a little time walking
We went to see a show
It was very slow
And in the end
You proved more than a friend
With kiss so sweet
And manners so neat
And tonight when I doze
I'll cling close to that rose
(I don't know if you're reading this or not, but I love you Jack. And thank you for a wonderful night. I'll miss you.)
Food that can't be beat
We spent some time talking
And a little time walking
We went to see a show
It was very slow
And in the end
You proved more than a friend
With kiss so sweet
And manners so neat
And tonight when I doze
I'll cling close to that rose
(I don't know if you're reading this or not, but I love you Jack. And thank you for a wonderful night. I'll miss you.)
Published 2nd Jun 2012
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2nd Jun 2012 9:35am
'I'll miss you.'
What you aren't going to see each other over summer break? /raises eyebrow
What you aren't going to see each other over summer break? /raises eyebrow
2nd Jun 2012 9:38pm
