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China White
Breath blooming in front of me,
My cigarette glows.
Wisps ebbing gracefully,
More beautiful than mid-winter snows.
Smoke dancing slowly,
Disappearing into the dark,
Cooing in the blackness,
I hear the song of a Lark.
Piercing the white noise,
That is the confines of my head,
Resting in solitude,
Limbs as heavy as lead.
Burnt lungs,
sweet taste,
Bitter memories,
Replaced,
As I feel the warmth,
Spreading through my veins,
Time now the only thing frozen,
You alleviate my pains.
Blood stained torniquet,
Laid beside me on the floor,
To you my dear China White,
I know I am your whore.
You love me,
Abuse me,
Know when to use me.
You pick me up,
Give me wings,
Let me fall,
Then the pain begins.
I am your slave,
I am your mistress,
It's you who I run to,
When I am in distress.
But right here and now,
In the piercing cold,
You cradle me softly,
Presence comforting and bold.
I must say goodbye,
But not tonight,
So here I sit,
In the cold,
Reveling in your delight.
My cigarette glows.
Wisps ebbing gracefully,
More beautiful than mid-winter snows.
Smoke dancing slowly,
Disappearing into the dark,
Cooing in the blackness,
I hear the song of a Lark.
Piercing the white noise,
That is the confines of my head,
Resting in solitude,
Limbs as heavy as lead.
Burnt lungs,
sweet taste,
Bitter memories,
Replaced,
As I feel the warmth,
Spreading through my veins,
Time now the only thing frozen,
You alleviate my pains.
Blood stained torniquet,
Laid beside me on the floor,
To you my dear China White,
I know I am your whore.
You love me,
Abuse me,
Know when to use me.
You pick me up,
Give me wings,
Let me fall,
Then the pain begins.
I am your slave,
I am your mistress,
It's you who I run to,
When I am in distress.
But right here and now,
In the piercing cold,
You cradle me softly,
Presence comforting and bold.
I must say goodbye,
But not tonight,
So here I sit,
In the cold,
Reveling in your delight.
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Re: China White
30th May 2012 9:08pm
Interesting that your pains are alleviated, until you fall and "the pain begins."
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re: Re: China White
30th May 2012 10:45pm
re Eskill001
Two different types of pain I am talking about... my psychological pain which is alleviated... but then the pain of addiction and withdrawals which begins if I do not keep having more
Two different types of pain I am talking about... my psychological pain which is alleviated... but then the pain of addiction and withdrawals which begins if I do not keep having more
Re: China White
30th May 2012 9:08pm
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30th May 2012 9:48pm
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Re: China White
1st Jun 2012 2:19pm
Re: China White
3rd Jun 2012 4:03am
I like your poem a lot the honesty is brillant.
i could almost feel the high.
i could almost feel the high.
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Re: China White
18th Jun 2012 10:19am
Re: Brittpage and doomedinpurplehaze, I really appreciate your comments. It is hard explaining the devastation contrasted with the elation in words x
Re: China White
30th Jun 2012 10:02am
Just stumbled upon you, cause I seen your username. Yes heroin is great, deep,big,everything,but it aint chic.. I understand the romance,every.junky would, im yet to sense the pain. Not dope sick, agonizing of course... But the pain of being philosophically bankrupt. Quick to comment and I apologize,i will acquaint myself more with your work and give more valid response..thank you.
(oh,btw is that pic u smoking dope?)
(oh,btw is that pic u smoking dope?)
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re: Re: China White
1st Jul 2012 6:21am
Yes that is me... Give my other poems a read and I am sure you will change your current impressions... chic is meant in an ironic sense.
Re: China White
Anonymous
25th Aug 2012 7:12pm
Though all should share their thoughts, I find yours in need of professional assistance.

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Re: China White
29th Oct 2012 8:29am
Upon opening a new account here I have to rebuild many things, including my reading list which this is going in. I hope you are well, my dear. You disappeared so abruptly from my world and I have been concerned about you as a result. I hope it's due to a guy or something and not Little Miss China White.
Gemini
Gemini
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