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pit _a_ pat
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pit _a_ pat
heartbeats for
You, others, people
redundantly
over and over
again and again
sometimes to a slow
crawl
right before
beating me up
for hearts beat
for with intent
beaten
never was a fan
racing drums
beating thrums
only the method
comes with meditation
methodically
moved, moving
with barely a
breath in between
delighted to nap
myself into a heart
stopping, stop
stopped
50 unique words
pit _a_ pat
heartbeats for
You, others, people
redundantly
over and over
again and again
sometimes to a slow
crawl
right before
beating me up
for hearts beat
for with intent
beaten
never was a fan
racing drums
beating thrums
only the method
comes with meditation
methodically
moved, moving
with barely a
breath in between
delighted to nap
myself into a heart
stopping, stop
stopped
50 unique words
Published 18th Apr 2025
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18th Apr 2025 8:48pm
hello Theo I can relate to this some people like the thrill that is love great write 💕
19th Apr 2025 1:07am
i was struggling to spit something, anything today.
Wow, dear Sister, you cause me to smile.
There was a definite theme but i didn't believe anyone would catch on to it.
appreciate You and the read.
Wow, dear Sister, you cause me to smile.
There was a definite theme but i didn't believe anyone would catch on to it.
appreciate You and the read.
