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Into White
I
Light – At the edge of the eye
As though
The foundation of sight – Light
Into the I
And out the other side – Sight
Like
A bullet hole
From black – Into white
II
White into black
Falling
into
a calling
of
No going back. This life
II
Will you always
be
Mine. If I sign
you
A line… of
Poetry..?
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Cipher
Poems
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Light – At the edge of the eye
As though
The foundation of sight – Light
Into the I
And out the other side – Sight
Like
A bullet hole
From black – Into white
II
White into black
Falling
into
a calling
of
No going back. This life
II
Will you always
be
Mine. If I sign
you
A line… of
Poetry..?
***
Cipher
Poems
***
Published 15th Apr 2025
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15th Apr 2025 10:21pm
Yesterday 2:14am
You write like ee cummings on too much coffee and pot.
THAT is a compliment. ee cummings is hot.
It's such interesting little nests of thought, and I really do enjoy looking in your work. Keep doing you.
THAT is a compliment. ee cummings is hot.
It's such interesting little nests of thought, and I really do enjoy looking in your work. Keep doing you.
