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Exuberant Existence
Roman wine red
Finely bled
Blush lips
A fine line
poetically aligned
Joyful jaw
line
Silk grape
skin surface
in sunlit vineyards
Singing birds
in
the sung sun
Odes composed by bards
in
The rubric
of
Your exuberance
To the magic
of
Your existence
***
NAPO.
ALT
***
Finely bled
Blush lips
A fine line
poetically aligned
Joyful jaw
line
Silk grape
skin surface
in sunlit vineyards
Singing birds
in
the sung sun
Odes composed by bards
in
The rubric
of
Your exuberance
To the magic
of
Your existence
***
NAPO.
ALT
***
Published 6th Apr 2025
Author's Note
(For beautiful Ahavati…
Thank you for your
great work in Napo
and allowing me
to participate…
You are beautiful
on the inside
and out...)
Thank you for your
great work in Napo
and allowing me
to participate…
You are beautiful
on the inside
and out...)
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6th Apr 2025 8:55pm
7th Apr 2025 3:56am
7th Apr 2025 11:22am
8th Apr 2025 00:16am
<#3
... Thank you Rohini..!
I kept wondering if I got
it right...
I am happy with the
extended metaphor
but I wonder if I should
have included more
precise imagery or
metaphor about
beautiful Ahavati's
eyes...
Hahaha...
:)
Honestly, I gazed
at her pic to write
this piece and she
became even
more beautiful to me...
Quite honestly...
Like she transformed
to me....
In writing this...
#Powerofwords
... Thank you Rohini..!
I kept wondering if I got
it right...
I am happy with the
extended metaphor
but I wonder if I should
have included more
precise imagery or
metaphor about
beautiful Ahavati's
eyes...
Hahaha...
:)
Honestly, I gazed
at her pic to write
this piece and she
became even
more beautiful to me...
Quite honestly...
Like she transformed
to me....
In writing this...
#Powerofwords
8th Apr 2025 5:56pm
