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Hemet

 
I remember it was early in the winter of ‘89
My family was attending a church retreat
Somewhere in the California desert
Somewhere in those hills
In those days
Hemet was very much a desert town

The second night I was there
I remember some of us went out to the campfire
It was cold
But in the desert
Away from all the light pollution
The sky was lit up with all kinds of stars
And at fourteen
Impressionable by faith
I felt that something bigger than me was out there
That something had painted that canvass in the sky

The stars that night inspired me
They inspired me to write


66 Unique Words
111 Total
Written by wallyroo92
Published
Author's Note
For Journey to the Stars, NaPoWriMo'25 Stomp the Prompt Comp, Prompt # 4
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