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The truth will unfold
Undeniably, shadows consume the sky.
Inescapably the stars dim and die.
Uncharacteristically, whispers turn to screams.
Disproportionately hope fractures dreams.
Incomprehensibly, the world twists to decay.
Unexceptionally time drifts away.
Individualistically, souls stand alone.
Irresponsibly they carve from stone.
Unintentionally, paths to ruin align.
Uncompromisingly darkness claims what’s mine.
Inescapably the stars dim and die.
Uncharacteristically, whispers turn to screams.
Disproportionately hope fractures dreams.
Incomprehensibly, the world twists to decay.
Unexceptionally time drifts away.
Individualistically, souls stand alone.
Irresponsibly they carve from stone.
Unintentionally, paths to ruin align.
Uncompromisingly darkness claims what’s mine.
Published 4th Apr 2025
Author's Note
Disproportionately, the weight of guilt will grow heavier than the crime itself.
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4th Apr 2025 2:52pm
So, this is your dark side, hah. I like the words you use to start the sentences, and I like the format and stanzas coming together. Seems to be a rather grim, bleak, and foreboding angle of perception of being mortal in an evil world. Anyway, good job at conveying what you were going with here. Thanks for sharing!
4th Apr 2025 10:39pm
Love the darkness, the morose setting lifts my spirits.. Your a man with such versatility in your poetry and execution. Always a pleasure to read and see a new piece from you.
4th Apr 2025 11:05pm
5th Apr 2025 3:38am
Powerfully penned, PAR. Into the list it belongs! Great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
