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let's ride out

 
my loneliness shows
please don't look at me
I'm best when observing
not adding my two cents
it adds to naught

my wisdom is flawed
We want humanity from God
Do we ever give him anything but blame

I completely grieve he desired companions
not snot nosed brats
fuck don't we all

Father, even the bots don't want to hear the complaints
let them have their plated gold kingdom
I want something real

in need of unconditional love
my brothers of old
let's vest up take our favorite lady
and go riding with the man in the open galaxies

leave the rest with their dolls since they can't get real
math is hard to get down to
I'm down for a man that's real

you going to leave that man out
then you're not man enough to ride with me
after all these eons
Written by smackdownraven
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