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Summer Dreaming
Sweat is running down a natural valley
Golden rays burn away winter's coat
Blue-green waters beckon you
Vanilla scent in the air
Crayola sunset paints the sky
A shadow of warmth surrounds you
Deep inhale to warm chilled bones
A smile as warm as the air graces your face
Dreaming of summer and what it brings
Golden rays burn away winter's coat
Blue-green waters beckon you
Vanilla scent in the air
Crayola sunset paints the sky
A shadow of warmth surrounds you
Deep inhale to warm chilled bones
A smile as warm as the air graces your face
Dreaming of summer and what it brings
Published Yesterday
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Thank you for painting a picture I can taste..especially after this long frigid winter
Yesterday 6:35pm
Yesterday 6:34pm
This is beautifully written Fia! You paint a beautiful picture with word in celebration of the longing for summer warmth upon our flesh. Very nice, I really like it! Great job!
Yesterday 6:36pm
Yesterday 6:48pm
I’m ready for just this type of escape! My mind now filled with sensations from this piece. Beautiful…
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Yesterday 9:33pm
Brilliantly penned, Fia. Great read, my friend. Best of luck in the competition. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Today 00:36am
What can I say now?
A vibrant and idyllic poem that captures the essence of summer and the joy it brings.
A vibrant and idyllic poem that captures the essence of summer and the joy it brings.
Today 00:43am
Today 1:15am
Beautiful write ✍️ stay in Cape Town it's always Sunny 😎🌄 even when it's raining..like the line about sweat running down a natural valley , has a spicy feel
Today 1:19am
