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cat/girl (2jade2gin2kayla)
(I could have cummed)
her little little body curled up against mine
her hot breath on my ear
rolling her tongue
like the "R" in spanish
purring so soft
my whole body warmed and tingling with endorphins
by this simple act
years later a girl wearing cat ears
solidified the fetish
her little little body curled up against mine
her hot breath on my ear
rolling her tongue
like the "R" in spanish
purring so soft
my whole body warmed and tingling with endorphins
by this simple act
years later a girl wearing cat ears
solidified the fetish
Published 1st Mar 2010
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Anonymous
1st Mar 2010 7:16am
still so tender,you blend them as if they are similar, who knows may be they are, and beneath the passion in your words always is that numbing sense of loss.This is classy nathan!
1st Mar 2010 11:02pm
well.. we are everything.. the whole universe.. the whole of existence.. is occurring within us as we realize it.. as we experience it.. everything is one.. so my themes are interchangeable.. they are opposing forces of the same coin.. so meaning? they are different but within us they mix as if they were the same thing.. we are everything and they are too.. darkness and light.. and we are one within ourselves.. classy? that's a new one.. ty so much for your considerate and thoughtful comments.. hugs
Anonymous
1st Mar 2010 8:04pm
wrought with a sculptor's grace and finesse. The line about the 'R in Spanish' was an incredible touch, subtle and insightful and delicate, and as I read this I almost felt myself becoming the narrator. The finale is also excellent, as it provides a perfect conclusion to the piece.
1st Mar 2010 8:42pm
wow that's cool comparing my writing to sculpting.. we are sentence sculpters though aren't we.. the wood and words are provided we just make rhyme and reason out of them.. appreciate the compliment and I'm glad you liked the last line.. I wasn't sure if it was "conclusive" enough it doesn't have the BANG that some of my pieces have but I think this is a more delicate piece so it just needed the right touch not necessarily a BANG.. cheers!!
