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Hunger
The Skin
The Body
The Soul
Hungers
It feeds
On minute
things
A single
Touch
Sparks
3,000
Receptors
It hungers
For one
Touch.
If you feed
My soul
The body
Will be
Satiated
If you feed
My Skin
The body
Will be
Satiated
Feed the
Body
Neither
Skin or Soul
Will satisfied
3,000
Receptors
Are waiting
to begin
The Body
The Soul
Hungers
It feeds
On minute
things
A single
Touch
Sparks
3,000
Receptors
It hungers
For one
Touch.
If you feed
My soul
The body
Will be
Satiated
If you feed
My Skin
The body
Will be
Satiated
Feed the
Body
Neither
Skin or Soul
Will satisfied
3,000
Receptors
Are waiting
to begin
Author's Note
Musing
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- Edited 22nd Apr 2025 7:45pm
5th Mar 2025 1:36am
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5th Mar 2025 2:35am
Brilliantly penned, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Great read, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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5th Mar 2025 2:38pm
Oh, to double the number...Oh, I am so hungry...May I feed you? Hugs and love, Oral
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5th Mar 2025 6:41pm
To begin the touch is craving itself, to waken those receptors for response - yes indeed! Brilliant write I say! And you awaken thought for good food for the soul. Nice!
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