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A Rented Bed

In that room that was new to us both,
the only sounds were soft creaking of
a rented bed and a soft slapping of skin on skin.
Despite the cool air, beads of sweat
formed on my brow and a flash of
panic shot behind my eyes.
I’d stumbled too close! I could not bring
myself to withdraw. I pressed deep and
paused accepting the inevitable.

God she was so warm and wet inside!

It was happening and there would be
no stopping it. My girlfriend’s brows furrowed
over eyes wide with disbelief as she
realized what was happening.
She was her parents' angel. What was I taking?
Despite her fear, she accepted me and
pulled me closer echoing each of my soft moans
with her sweet soprano whimper until I was done.
Written by LostViking (Lost Viking)
Published
Author's Note
Remembering renting a motel room the first time with a girlfriend.
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