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You
Lying in the colorless walls
I imagine myself as the Schrödinger's cat
And think to myself
If you were with me right now
I would definitely be alive
Walking on the endless road
I imagine myself as a wandering river
And think to myself
If you were with me right now
I would definitely know there's a sea
Putting a tasteless meal into my mouth
I imagine myself as the Snake
And think to myself
If you were with me right now
I would definitely not eat my tail
Yes
You are the color of my home
The end of my road
The taste of my meal
I imagine myself as the Schrödinger's cat
And think to myself
If you were with me right now
I would definitely be alive
Walking on the endless road
I imagine myself as a wandering river
And think to myself
If you were with me right now
I would definitely know there's a sea
Putting a tasteless meal into my mouth
I imagine myself as the Snake
And think to myself
If you were with me right now
I would definitely not eat my tail
Yes
You are the color of my home
The end of my road
The taste of my meal
Published 26th Feb 2025
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27th Feb 2025 1:04am
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28th Feb 2025 5:51pm
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The imagery used and words spun around each phrase makes the stanzas turn into an intensity at the end. For me this poem has a great depth. I enjoyed the read, greetings and blessings, Rianne
The imagery used and words spun around each phrase makes the stanzas turn into an intensity at the end. For me this poem has a great depth. I enjoyed the read, greetings and blessings, Rianne
Yesterday 8:26am
