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Couples Unexpectedly Similar #3
Through keyholes' glimpse a world unknown,
mirrors reflect, a love has grown,
barriers crossed, where flaws are shown.
Silent wishes through locked embrace,
mirrors' glance, a hidden place,
keyholes open love's own space.
Eyes that meet in secret views.
Mirrors join what time renews.
Keyholes whispers breaking through.
Through barriers, one love takes flight.
Mirrors dance in a starry night.
Keyholes hold all dreams so tight.
Boundaries fade, all hearts align,
mirrors shine with love's design,
keyholes open in love divine.
mirrors reflect, a love has grown,
barriers crossed, where flaws are shown.
Silent wishes through locked embrace,
mirrors' glance, a hidden place,
keyholes open love's own space.
Eyes that meet in secret views.
Mirrors join what time renews.
Keyholes whispers breaking through.
Through barriers, one love takes flight.
Mirrors dance in a starry night.
Keyholes hold all dreams so tight.
Boundaries fade, all hearts align,
mirrors shine with love's design,
keyholes open in love divine.
Published 22nd Feb 2025
Author's Note
What if we put a mirror on the other side of a keyhole?
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22nd Feb 2025 4:01pm
That's a lovely little poem! I like how it uses the imagery of keyholes and mirrors to suggest both hidden intimacy and a kind of revealing of true selves. It really captures that feeling of discovering a deep connection.
22nd Feb 2025 4:34pm
22nd Feb 2025 4:11pm
What a marvelous and creative poem. Awesome in your rhyme scheme and the question of if we placed a mirror on the other side of a keyhole. What possibilities there.
22nd Feb 2025 8:23pm
23rd Feb 2025 4:32am
Beautifully penned, PAR. Into the list it belongs. Great read, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
23rd Feb 2025 8:30am
