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Falling Inside of Her
Looking down at her tender whiteness,
I wanted to push my spirit into her flesh.
I wanted fall into the depths of her.
And so, when her fingers led me there,
it felt like I was falling, falling with
windows of light flying past.
I no longer had myself at all.
I was totally inside of her.
I knew life would never be the
same again after that.
I wanted to push my spirit into her flesh.
I wanted fall into the depths of her.
And so, when her fingers led me there,
it felt like I was falling, falling with
windows of light flying past.
I no longer had myself at all.
I was totally inside of her.
I knew life would never be the
same again after that.
Published 22nd Feb 2025
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Remembering that first time.
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22nd Feb 2025 7:54pm
Last lines so poignant:
I no longer had myself at all.
I was totally inside of her.
I knew life would never be the
same again after that. [leave to imagination how]
I no longer had myself at all.
I was totally inside of her.
I knew life would never be the
same again after that. [leave to imagination how]
