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thoughts from a eaten away mind
When thoughts flow from your head as water
And your memories whisked away as dust
Your mind no longer yours
What can you do?
But be helpless....
And your memories whisked away as dust
Your mind no longer yours
What can you do?
But be helpless....
Published 26th May 2012
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Anonymous
26th May 2012 00:50am
This Haiku (?) reads so beautifully and is so wise that I would hardly take you for a new poet...
Welcome New Member
Peace
Kitty
Welcome New Member
Peace
Kitty
26th May 2012 2:16am
Its just a short poem there are to many syllables in the first line to be a haiku actually to many lines to be a haiku... Thank you for the welcome :) I'm happy to be here
26th May 2012 3:15pm
Such a short poem has such a strong impact, I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work!
1st Jun 2012 5:00pm
