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Abigail
A cardinal song bird
Balanced on a Gail of scales
She is liberated from putting on airs
By getting down to earth
And working with others
To decorate a Greathouse within The Great Work
A rouge a rose to soil her beauty
Only to prick the hand
Who thought it could grasp
That which stems from her ability to thrive
Even uprooted, she still remains
Her Father’s Joy
2-4-2025
Balanced on a Gail of scales
She is liberated from putting on airs
By getting down to earth
And working with others
To decorate a Greathouse within The Great Work
A rouge a rose to soil her beauty
Only to prick the hand
Who thought it could grasp
That which stems from her ability to thrive
Even uprooted, she still remains
Her Father’s Joy
2-4-2025
Published 4th Feb 2025
Author's Note
A poem written for my sister Abby!
Go check out her music at gail_rose_greathouse on instagram
And Gail Greathouse on Youtube
Go check out her music at gail_rose_greathouse on instagram
And Gail Greathouse on Youtube
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5th Feb 2025 3:09am
This is really good. I love it. Your talent is obvious, as well. Dare I say you're an actual poet?!
It's definitely poetically written. That's skill.
It's definitely poetically written. That's skill.
5th Feb 2025 10:56pm
Your appreciation is most welcome. Definitely what I needed after this trying day. Thank you for taking notice of my efforts. It means a lot.
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5th Feb 2025 11:00pm
Such a thoughtful comment. I'm glad you took the journey with me. Hope to see you on more.
