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emotional suction
love´s is not a lie
it's an origami cuckoo
catched by the whirlpool
of a porcelain blackhole
it's an origami cuckoo
catched by the whirlpool
of a porcelain blackhole
Written by
PAR
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
Published 28th Jan 2025
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Re. emotional suction
28th Jan 2025 9:27pm
The thoughts of emotional suction and the image of a porcelain backbone is a beautiful and seductive thought. Thanks for the metaphor. HKLL
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28th Jan 2025 11:08pm
Love is not a lie, its an origami cuckoo. I read that several times. Twisted and shaped in crazy ways but not a lie
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29th Jan 2025 8:28am
This is like a song, would be great to music, perhaps repeated a few times. Im sure it would be a hit!
Fabulously Paulo! Greetings and blessings
Rianne
Fabulously Paulo! Greetings and blessings
Rianne
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