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the emo poem's antichrist.
you’re the doodles in my notebook.
you’re the daydreams in my head.
you’re the shaking in my palms
and why my face turns red.
you’re the flutters in my heart.
you’re the smile on my face.
you’re the feelings that i have
which i know aren’t out of place.
you’re my knight in shining armor.
you’re my wonderful cliché.
you’re a glorious sensation
that will never fade away.
you’re the essence of perfection.
you’re a blessing from above.
you’re the holder of my heart
and the one I’ll always love.
you’re the daydreams in my head.
you’re the shaking in my palms
and why my face turns red.
you’re the flutters in my heart.
you’re the smile on my face.
you’re the feelings that i have
which i know aren’t out of place.
you’re my knight in shining armor.
you’re my wonderful cliché.
you’re a glorious sensation
that will never fade away.
you’re the essence of perfection.
you’re a blessing from above.
you’re the holder of my heart
and the one I’ll always love.
Published 27th Feb 2010
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27th Feb 2010 5:48pm
...for this pleasant ditty with its easy rhyme scheme. I would have used "the smile UPon my face" - but don't worry I can be a nitpicker sometimes, Claire. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
27th Feb 2010 10:55pm
Very sweet, very cute. It gave me that warm fuzzy feeling. It was fun to read, and flowed nicely.
27th Feb 2010 11:52pm
Loved the way this poem just bounced along, skipping through a field of poppys.
10th Mar 2010 8:33pm
21st Feb 2012 11:31pm
very nice! good flow, no reaching n lots of descriptive statements. save the commas for novels! You avoided using CAP's (which I liked) yet you dress it with commas like tree on xmas.?.?.. still solid stuff!
