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Catching the Breath

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He groaned, Taking...
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She moaned, Giving...
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Her Body and Soul

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Crimsonofpassion

Written by Crimsonofpassion

Published 26th Jan 2025

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Re. Catching the Breath

Numer90 (Numer0-un0)

1st Feb 2025 11:02am

The overall effect is one of sensual and emotional intimacy, conveyed through simple yet powerful language. Well done!

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Crimsonofpassion

6th Feb 2025 5:19am

Thanks man 👍

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