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Is that You?        
         
  uninvited, unforeseen...        
how am I now replaying the same scene        
  over and over again        
       
reliving this        
       endless        
   loop   of confusion        
       
The restaurant air was filled with your meaningless babble.        
stories of past lovers but nothing present        
          as I sat in front of you - waiting to be seen.        
   You smelled of orange blossoms       
     
 Forbidden.       
did your hand burn?      
Your lips should have singed off as they grazed mine      
       
     
a concert hall filled with musicians and admirers alike        
   I will never forget that night.      
Melodies of bliss were slowly drowned out by your presence.       
  Such long dark hair -sucking the sound out from around me      
those cat eyes piercing through reality.      
     
suffocated in confusion.      
       
       
It is you             
       
       
Written by mitjima (Lunarbitsh)
Published | Edited 25th Jan 2025
Author's Note
complete and utter babble on an old memory that brought on so many emotions.
Tonight is very interesting, but I will return for another spill into the foam.
♫ ♪ ♬
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jJjDskJ0O5A
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