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Abed
Come. Lie here abed
with me
Let me touch, explore
with feather fingerings
the wild horizons
of your flesh
the ivory of it all
and then unleash
the coiled braids of your hair
and make them
unconfined
upon my curious hand.
The night and I
need wantoning
with me
Let me touch, explore
with feather fingerings
the wild horizons
of your flesh
the ivory of it all
and then unleash
the coiled braids of your hair
and make them
unconfined
upon my curious hand.
The night and I
need wantoning
Published 23rd Jan 2025
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23rd Jan 2025 3:07pm
What a sensual and intimate poem!
The tone is one of gentle and longing invitation, with the speaker beckoning the beloved to join them in a night of intimacy and connection.
Overall, this poem is a beautiful and sensual expression of desire and intimacy.
The tone is one of gentle and longing invitation, with the speaker beckoning the beloved to join them in a night of intimacy and connection.
Overall, this poem is a beautiful and sensual expression of desire and intimacy.
23rd Jan 2025 4:24pm
What a soft touch. It is inviting to the partner, and I like how you added her hair. Like you are taking in every detail.
