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Me Or You
At a shadow's distance im there
Resonant burning selfishness awkwardly
Holds me expressively aware
of no match compared
To my times extent remembers hope
As it may fade leavin' no note
Summoning a rhyme from a time
Long ago, my happiness had no bound
Up and leaving a place so perfect and sound
to a place that has no hope and full of rounds
emptying echoing ,...silhouetting
I dont have but a couple thoughts to debate
between now and how it would be great
to know a few ways
to express a good phrase
likely to reach
you as i am to teach
you a thing or two...
who am I?..me or you
Rhetorical values slipped under the folds
Excuses linger till it rots or molds
Open shutter sound vaguely surrounds
My conscience to reserve my rounds
Blissfully ....
And we tread this world carefully
Back in the mind we are not peacefully
Ready to show
How life is below
Reality tears the mind and soul
If you let it grab hold
I dont have but a couple thoughts to debate
between now and how it would be great
to know a few ways to express a good phrase
likely to reach
you as i am to teach
you a thing or two...
who am i?...me or you
Resonant burning selfishness awkwardly
Holds me expressively aware
of no match compared
To my times extent remembers hope
As it may fade leavin' no note
Summoning a rhyme from a time
Long ago, my happiness had no bound
Up and leaving a place so perfect and sound
to a place that has no hope and full of rounds
emptying echoing ,...silhouetting
I dont have but a couple thoughts to debate
between now and how it would be great
to know a few ways
to express a good phrase
likely to reach
you as i am to teach
you a thing or two...
who am I?..me or you
Rhetorical values slipped under the folds
Excuses linger till it rots or molds
Open shutter sound vaguely surrounds
My conscience to reserve my rounds
Blissfully ....
And we tread this world carefully
Back in the mind we are not peacefully
Ready to show
How life is below
Reality tears the mind and soul
If you let it grab hold
I dont have but a couple thoughts to debate
between now and how it would be great
to know a few ways to express a good phrase
likely to reach
you as i am to teach
you a thing or two...
who am i?...me or you
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