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A Throbbing Scent - with MySmile
Pale lips of blue perishable breath
Silence without cliches, listening,
Stuck upon a memory that you are
Blossoming in death’s trite without
Critique in my slumber as I sleep
***
Stirred is the mind by a throbbing scent
Soul refilled straying off an end
A warm love unearthed now blooming
So soft the sound of a seed life sipping
Silence just retreated while smiling..
Silence without cliches, listening,
Stuck upon a memory that you are
Blossoming in death’s trite without
Critique in my slumber as I sleep
***
Stirred is the mind by a throbbing scent
Soul refilled straying off an end
A warm love unearthed now blooming
So soft the sound of a seed life sipping
Silence just retreated while smiling..
Published 19th Jan 2025
Author's Note
A pleasure to write with, my collaborator.
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19th Jan 2025 10:18pm
Such a pleasure reading a so wonderful collaboration! Thank you so much, adagio! God bless you.
19th Jan 2025 10:28pm
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