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Long Time Forever
In slow-motion touching my shoulder
as the weight of silence whispers
Bringing me closer to God
riding the winds with wings
In a timeless slow-motion and blue sky
a long time in forever
as the weight of silence whispers
Bringing me closer to God
riding the winds with wings
In a timeless slow-motion and blue sky
a long time in forever
Published 17th Jan 2025
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17th Jan 2025 2:30pm
I really found this penning quite touching a very soothing tone to your brevity, there sense of love abounds...I simply adore that visual of everything moving in slow-motion when you are in love because it is a relatable truth...Blessings my poetic friend
17th Jan 2025 2:39pm
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17th Jan 2025 3:03pm
I appreciate that, although, amazing is for poets. I'm just a tarnished scribbler.
17th Jan 2025 7:42pm
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17th Jan 2025 9:04pm
You have a great potential 👍 for writing skills as you express your thoughts on different subjects that make one think for thyself from a readers prospective 👊💪.
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
17th Jan 2025 9:23pm
17th Jan 2025 11:40pm
Nope you are not you are a writer with skills ✍️ with pen to paper 📜 you have the ability to manifest that which you think 🤔 never doubt thyself for sure that only holds you back from expressing your true spiritual potential 👍🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
