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I
All
women
I loved are
dead and gone
does it however make
me an emotional serial killer
!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
women
I loved are
dead and gone
does it however make
me an emotional serial killer
!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Published 15th Jan 2025
Author's Note
Written after knowing about the death of the last one.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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15th Jan 2025 11:22am
WOW! This is really cool. Love the words, format and question at the end. Clever piece my friend.
15th Jan 2025 11:46am
15th Jan 2025 2:21pm
No! It is just a reminder that love has to face the heartache of lost, and yet find a place in the heart to cherish those blessed times...to me, it would be a "serial killing" to kill the memories. This short poem contains much to think about. Love your sensitivity. HKL
15th Jan 2025 2:54pm
15th Jan 2025 9:53pm
Powerful write, PAR. Like the style and ending, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
15th Jan 2025 11:48pm
