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I won't rest
In life I was silenced
never free by those individuals who didn't respect me
In death
I won't rest
Feelings I will express
Agitated
Retaliation Prosecution
Vindication Exoneration
I'm free
never free by those individuals who didn't respect me
In death
I won't rest
Feelings I will express
Agitated
Retaliation Prosecution
Vindication Exoneration
I'm free
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Re. I won't rest
Wow.
This resonated.
I’ve had that feeling before, that my death will bring freedom. I even had that feeling that my death will bring vengeance, so I tried it. More than once It’s a f’d up feeling. The fact that it didn’t work was enough to make me see how f’d up it was. I was different person then.
Excellent poem, Keith.
This resonated.
I’ve had that feeling before, that my death will bring freedom. I even had that feeling that my death will bring vengeance, so I tried it. More than once It’s a f’d up feeling. The fact that it didn’t work was enough to make me see how f’d up it was. I was different person then.
Excellent poem, Keith.
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11th Jan 2025 3:31pm
Many of us think to ourselves and say, what if...this or that occurred. I agree. with you
Thanks Mary!!
Thanks Mary!!
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12th Jan 2025 2:14pm
Freedom is all .. in each breath .. in true love .. yes freedom n it’s expression as you say dear Keith in life n death n beyond .. yes I feel the red revolution in each stance of freedom.. in poetry in art .. why be in a slavish silence at all in life or anywhere? your arriving & essence in here speaks loud aloud xx
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Re: Re. I won't rest
12th Jan 2025 3:09pm
Hello Uma. Always stand up for what you believe in. Thank you for your comments!