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Excel
Rhymes and spaces
Words some verse
Poets, places
Eyes observe
Pen and ink
Cast magic spells
Thoughts extract
Whilst YOU excel
Words some verse
Poets, places
Eyes observe
Pen and ink
Cast magic spells
Thoughts extract
Whilst YOU excel
Published 5th Jan 2025
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5th Jan 2025 10:43am
Dear P,
Quick energy. That’s what I thought while reading this. The writer has to get it down as quickly as can be once those ideas start needing to be birthed. I could hear the fast ticking of a type writer in this piece. Great write.
H🌷
Quick energy. That’s what I thought while reading this. The writer has to get it down as quickly as can be once those ideas start needing to be birthed. I could hear the fast ticking of a type writer in this piece. Great write.
H🌷
5th Jan 2025 11:06am
5th Jan 2025 11:34am
I'm constantly observing how poets see the same things as non-writers, but the expression becomes something more than the observation. Being able to create art visible to all with what the world provides...amazing.
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6th Jan 2025 3:41am
Beautifully penned, Pete. We do all of those things for sure, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
6th Jan 2025 11:25am
