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If Only
If only you could hear my heart
Its screaming how it misses you
If only I could hear yours
Maybe I'd understand that you needed to go
Its screaming how it misses you
If only I could hear yours
Maybe I'd understand that you needed to go
Published 23rd May 2012
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23rd May 2012 2:51am
Anonymous
6th Oct 2013 5:47pm
2nd line - its needs an apostrophe.
Nice little thought process however. Sometimes it's refreshing to read these short but sweet offerings.
Thank you for the read.
Nice little thought process however. Sometimes it's refreshing to read these short but sweet offerings.
Thank you for the read.
8th Apr 2016 6:56am
Simple with conviction. Deep in a shallow expression, lie' s what matters most. Keep Grindin CAOS737
