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On My Radar, Love
Can you feel
my penetrating radar
locked on you?
Driven to know things
done in the dark
or light
depending on your fancies
A curiosity tugs at me
an appetite induced
I wonder if you think of me
if you ever entertained
a desire to be splayed
for my perusal
Because I've certainly thought of you
my penetrating radar
locked on you?
Driven to know things
done in the dark
or light
depending on your fancies
A curiosity tugs at me
an appetite induced
I wonder if you think of me
if you ever entertained
a desire to be splayed
for my perusal
Because I've certainly thought of you
Published 31st Dec 2024
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31st Dec 2024 2:25pm
1st Jan 2025 3:55pm
Glad you think so, Fia. And in my experience it always best to let her decide. Usually leads to maximum benefits.
31st Dec 2024 7:42pm
1st Jan 2025 3:55pm
;)
I’d add this to my RL this more than once if I could but the universe won’t even let me add it once. Guess I’ll just have to tattoo it on my inner thigh instead…
I’d add this to my RL this more than once if I could but the universe won’t even let me add it once. Guess I’ll just have to tattoo it on my inner thigh instead…
1st Jan 2025 3:56pm
So glad it hit the spot! I certainly like the choice of placement for that tattoo. ;)
5th Jan 2025 2:33am
You write beautiful and scintillating erotica, yet there is a hidden vulnerability that is intoxicating... Gorgeous and wonderfully sparse piece.
5th Jan 2025 5:10pm
I so appreciate the thoughtful compliment. "Scintillating"...I love that.
