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Lust
Heaven knows
We spent our junior years
Grinding
To the electric
Pop sounds
Of 90s vixens
And
If I ever truly knew
What love was
I’d have run
Like a coward
Before the storm
Breaking
As a God-given blessing
On the parched earth
We spent our junior years
Grinding
To the electric
Pop sounds
Of 90s vixens
And
If I ever truly knew
What love was
I’d have run
Like a coward
Before the storm
Breaking
As a God-given blessing
On the parched earth
Published 22nd Dec 2024
Author's Note
In youth, we thought we were accomplished lovers. Years later, I realized I was arbitrary at best.
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22nd Dec 2024 7:37am
Dear TMW,
I enjoyed the realization of your poem. It made me think of my youth and what I thought I knew all those centuries ago. Oh the hubris. Your authors note is as poetic as your poem. Fab introspection. H🌷
I enjoyed the realization of your poem. It made me think of my youth and what I thought I knew all those centuries ago. Oh the hubris. Your authors note is as poetic as your poem. Fab introspection. H🌷
22nd Dec 2024 10:50am
