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Systemic Damage
Questions are a never ending spiral
Searching for answers can get crazy
Evil thoughts pulse until it goes viral
Tired ideas has made the vision hazy
Masks conceal the cruelest intentions
Orchestrated fear designed to control
Conflict feeds all these rising tensions
It’s systemic damage that takes it’s toll
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Searching for answers can get crazy
Evil thoughts pulse until it goes viral
Tired ideas has made the vision hazy
Masks conceal the cruelest intentions
Orchestrated fear designed to control
Conflict feeds all these rising tensions
It’s systemic damage that takes it’s toll
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. Just kinda thinking out loud in this one. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" Mars ain't the kind of place to raise your kids
In fact, it's cold as hell"
- Bernie Taupin
- Damian DeadLove
" Mars ain't the kind of place to raise your kids
In fact, it's cold as hell"
- Bernie Taupin
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Re. Systemic Damage
21st Dec 2024 11:27am
Re: Re. Systemic Damage
22nd Dec 2024 4:41am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Systemic Damage
21st Dec 2024 11:46am
Everything (unfortunately) revolves around control, power and money.
Great piece, my friend, I appreciate you.
Great piece, my friend, I appreciate you.
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Re: Re. Systemic Damage
22nd Dec 2024 4:43am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. Totally agree, glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Systemic Damage
21st Dec 2024 2:00pm
Systems are for order maintenance, and so when a particular order no longer provides, then the system must be reengineered.
Preferably without violence.
Preferably without violence.
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Re: Re. Systemic Damage
22nd Dec 2024 4:44am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words. MS. Hit the nail on the head my friend. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Systemic Damage
21st Dec 2024 2:33pm
Re: Re. Systemic Damage
22nd Dec 2024 4:46am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Systemic Damage
21st Dec 2024 4:48pm
the so fed & trapped in vicious cycle when one’s in.. then all sinks to deaths just deaths. sometimes one knowingly goes down suicidal, that which is pathetic .. much things you said so concise .. of the politicking & minded times.. thoughtful musing Damian xx
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Re: Re. Systemic Damage
22nd Dec 2024 4:47am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Uma. I concur my friend. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Systemic Damage
22nd Dec 2024 5:55am
Very concise and succinct - straight to the point. This hits pretty hard in it's neat and tidy fashion. Very concrete conceptualization for me, reading this. You did a good job of putting it together. The poor poet's requiem - the inability for mankind to find peace, and sustainability. Good job, again, in the format, and capturing your particular perception to make distinction of reality, and how that is compared to our hopes and dreams of peace and prosperity that is impossible to currently attain. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Re. Systemic Damage
22nd Dec 2024 7:09am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, brother. You're spot on again in your analysis. The poor poet with the tired brain. lol. Getting old with a mind that never stops thinking, add to that sleep apnea, you get a ticking time bomb. I've always been this way, but my body can't keep up like it use to. I'm glad you connected withe the write. Enjoyed your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Systemic Damage
23rd Dec 2024 1:14am
Keep musing. You take us with you on the journey & keep us thinking & alert.
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Re: Re. Systemic Damage
23rd Dec 2024 3:41am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Don't plan on slowing down anytime soon. Glad you liked the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian