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Obey!
Obey, okay
Down my slave
I'll make you pay
My mind depraved
Handcuffed, tied
Blindfold, gagged
Brutal cries
Boy I'm bad!
Down my slave
I'll make you pay
My mind depraved
Handcuffed, tied
Blindfold, gagged
Brutal cries
Boy I'm bad!
Author's Note
69 Shades of Pete #8
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Re. Obey!
20th Dec 2024 8:43am
First off, the picture caught my eye. Then the words describe the going on's in this ink, perfectly. Phenomenal write, Pete. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. Obey!
20th Dec 2024 11:05am
Re. Obey!
20th Dec 2024 11:23am
Re. Obey!
20th Dec 2024 11:42am
As a BDSM-er / kinkster this is right up my alley ;-)
Love that last line & that picture pairs your piece perfectly 🖤
Love that last line & that picture pairs your piece perfectly 🖤
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Re: Re. Obey!
20th Dec 2024 12:04pm
Re. Obey!
20th Dec 2024 2:01pm
Who wouldn't obey! The greater the obedience the greater the pleasure. Hugs and love, Oral
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Love it!
21st Dec 2024 2:43am
This is so bold and intense! The rhythm really pulls me in, and the way you capture the power dynamic is both dark and fascinating. It’s raw, unapologetic, and full of emotion—definitely leaves an impression. Amazing work!"
Let me know if this feels better!
Let me know if this feels better!
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Re: Love it!
21st Dec 2024 2:55am
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Re. Obey!
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