happy to wear her scar

I like the poem a lot, especially the lines "the deeper the love the bigger the scar," and "that's the gamble you take/ when you bet with your fuckin heart." I personally think there is so much profanity the poem almost seems not sincere or even immature and childish. i mean, you used "shit" three times in a four stanza poem. profanity is good when it's adding to the emotion of the poem, this is just a tad overdone. good poem though, I can feel the heartache.

I love this poem, I bet you could have made it longer, but it's still perfectly written as it is lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I Love This Piece J.
It is real...and spills right out of you.
"So eventhough she broke my heart,
I smile and rub my fingers ovewr the scar"
That..... is classic man
simply classic!

this is really good

This is raw and heartfelt x love it

I can feel it...