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Contradiction
Smiling in the direction of an enemy,
then running off and whining to everyone else.
I'm the coward? Me? Are you sure?
A friend of mine once put it so
beautifully, 'If you were any more up yourself,
you could fuck yourself from the inside.'
And you really could at this point.
If you got any more hypocritical,
you'd be choking on your own
contradictions.
then running off and whining to everyone else.
I'm the coward? Me? Are you sure?
A friend of mine once put it so
beautifully, 'If you were any more up yourself,
you could fuck yourself from the inside.'
And you really could at this point.
If you got any more hypocritical,
you'd be choking on your own
contradictions.
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Re: Contradiction
Anonymous
22nd May 2012 4:43am
loved this. wow, u must know this person you are referring to well and the situation well. just wondering if you can explain since you seem to know so much why this person is hypocritical. would love to know. back your words up.
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re: Re: Contradiction
22nd May 2012 5:36am
It was just a random write, tbh, it has nothing to really do with anyone. I based it off of a friend of mine's poem 'Hypocrisy'.
BTW, why subscribe to my updates if all you wanna do is bitch about my writing? Your comments are shit to me, so I'm not going to even bother reading another one.
Bloooooocked. (:
BTW, why subscribe to my updates if all you wanna do is bitch about my writing? Your comments are shit to me, so I'm not going to even bother reading another one.
Bloooooocked. (:
re: re: Re: Contradiction
22nd May 2012 5:39am
Oh, and another thing, I am not interested in petty drama, so I'm not sure who the hell you think I am - some dude or son according to your last post or w/e - but please don't spread your ignorance around me again, not that you really can anyway after I blocked you. (; I'd rather not have to read any more of your pointless comments and words on my own poems to be honest, hence the block.
Re: Contradiction
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd May 2012 6:27am
22nd May 2012 6:16am
bullshit, and u know it. you are just fueling into the fire. you know exactly what i am talking about and you are a drama queen. now back the fuck off. btw, you still havent backed up what you wrote and if it was someone you new?
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re: Re: Contradiction
22nd May 2012 7:06am
I tried to be polite, thought you just mistook me as someone else, but I can see you are just a so proclaimed 'drama queen' yourself. (:
I told you already, it was based off of a poem you already commented on because you've somehow deluded yourself into thinking I'm someone you know and you can't be an adult - which is really sad, considering you have children - and just answer my message I sent to you which was an apology for me being ticked so easily without confronting. My block was well placed now, I see.
Please go rot in hole, you're not longer worth my efforts. (':
I told you already, it was based off of a poem you already commented on because you've somehow deluded yourself into thinking I'm someone you know and you can't be an adult - which is really sad, considering you have children - and just answer my message I sent to you which was an apology for me being ticked so easily without confronting. My block was well placed now, I see.
Please go rot in hole, you're not longer worth my efforts. (':
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22nd May 2012 7:09am
Re: Contradiction
22nd May 2012 12:57pm
Enjoyed ty..
The beauty about poetry is you do not need to explain anything to anyone at any time if one does not desire...I have written poetry that many can not understand and never will. many people do understand...(my meanings)Some feel their own... For myself, humbly speaking, poetry is about healing ones soul, being creative and releasing all emotions inside, be it love or war...If it helps you inside or another..never doubt yourself ever... that those words were meant to be written...hope I made sense ..Keep Writing....Deb
The beauty about poetry is you do not need to explain anything to anyone at any time if one does not desire...I have written poetry that many can not understand and never will. many people do understand...(my meanings)Some feel their own... For myself, humbly speaking, poetry is about healing ones soul, being creative and releasing all emotions inside, be it love or war...If it helps you inside or another..never doubt yourself ever... that those words were meant to be written...hope I made sense ..Keep Writing....Deb
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re: Re: Contradiction
22nd May 2012 1:19pm
Yeah, you made perfect sense. The girl who comment before you is exactly that, a little girl. She has children, she needs to grow and act her age assuming that she's in her adult years. She quit DU though according to her profile, so I cheer for one less IDIOT I have to see every day or so roaming through this place. (:
Thanks for the wonderful feedback Deb! <3
Thanks for the wonderful feedback Deb! <3
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24th May 2012 11:45am