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Lost My Love
I'm at a loss
I can't come up for air
The celebrations aren't the same without you there
I stay quiet but I want to scream
The circle was broken the absence is felt
Please help me cope
Another death another loss
I can't take what's been taken away
It's just a task to make it day to day
I feel like I'm losing my mind
I feel all alone
I sit in silence
Does anybody else feel this at all?
I can't come up for air
The celebrations aren't the same without you there
I stay quiet but I want to scream
The circle was broken the absence is felt
Please help me cope
Another death another loss
I can't take what's been taken away
It's just a task to make it day to day
I feel like I'm losing my mind
I feel all alone
I sit in silence
Does anybody else feel this at all?
Published 2nd Dec 2024
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Yesterday 00:27am
This is so gut wrenching. I had to comfort a woman today who just lost her husband. You can see she was lost, Good one
Yesterday 00:33am
That's sad. She's a lucky woman to have you by her side. I can see you being a light in her corner.
Thanks for the feedback Fia
xxoxo
Thanks for the feedback Fia
xxoxo
Yesterday 00:33am
Dear V of I,
Stark and stunning. The isolation is palpable in this piece and ever so relatable. The meter of this read lends itself to the flow and while the subject is difficult your write is excellent. H🌷
Stark and stunning. The isolation is palpable in this piece and ever so relatable. The meter of this read lends itself to the flow and while the subject is difficult your write is excellent. H🌷
Yesterday 00:34am
Thank you Honoria. Nice to hear from you.
I appreciate your comments, always!!
I appreciate your comments, always!!
Yesterday 3:22am
Brilliantly written, Keith. Dig this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Yesterday 10:04am
