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A friend like a sun
I need your warm hand my friend
You helped me yesterday
And I felt like crying
You are sun
Where it would have been cold
You are a laughter
Where it would have been emptiness
I need your sweet talk
Your embrace
To look at your face
A dejavu of something I love.
You helped me yesterday
And I felt like crying
You are sun
Where it would have been cold
You are a laughter
Where it would have been emptiness
I need your sweet talk
Your embrace
To look at your face
A dejavu of something I love.
Published 27th Nov 2024
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27th Nov 2024 9:21pm
27th Nov 2024 9:28pm
27th Nov 2024 9:31pm
My pleasure.
You make my day when I see you in my updates feed. Your poetry is authentic, brave and always touches a part of me that very few poets do.
Have a terrific day.
You make my day when I see you in my updates feed. Your poetry is authentic, brave and always touches a part of me that very few poets do.
Have a terrific day.
27th Nov 2024 9:40pm
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30th Nov 2024 11:41am
I feel this one like the other's here have said
Great write and strong emotion ..
BIG LIKE
Great write and strong emotion ..
BIG LIKE
30th Nov 2024 11:43am
