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Farewell
Acting like I need to mend.
Implying that I'm broken.
Tells a weakness in your head.
As insults often spoken.
Your ignorance to see.
Is easy to believe.
Your good intentions may be,
The reason I grit my teeth.
Your tactics of goodwill.
Manipulative speech.
Your practiced fictitious guilt.
Is just not worth the grief.
It's time for me to leave.
The only contrition I feel.
Is for overwhelming relief.
But you I can never tell.
Silence says my farewell.
A R.M.
Implying that I'm broken.
Tells a weakness in your head.
As insults often spoken.
Your ignorance to see.
Is easy to believe.
Your good intentions may be,
The reason I grit my teeth.
Your tactics of goodwill.
Manipulative speech.
Your practiced fictitious guilt.
Is just not worth the grief.
It's time for me to leave.
The only contrition I feel.
Is for overwhelming relief.
But you I can never tell.
Silence says my farewell.
A R.M.
Published 22nd Nov 2024
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22nd Nov 2024 12:01pm
Kind of sad, but all too common for modern relationships. A lot of men are simply pigs that don't listen, heh. I'm just saying, that's the way it is. I like how you capture the hypocrisy of the guy involved. Role-playing like you have something to be ashamed of, when he simply doesn't deserve an honest, true, committed partner, since he takes them for granted. Again, overall, great job. I liked the touch of rhyme here too. Helped it flow well. Thanks for sharing!
28th Nov 2024 5:59am
Thank you, this one was good therapy for me. No way to ever find closure in that suffocating relationship. I love Men. But Men confuse the hell out of me. Especially when they are confused about their own behavior. Lol
29th Nov 2024 00:42am
Your poem is a powerful expression of frustration, hurt, and passive-aggressive assertiveness. I liked it. Thank you for sharing.
17th Dec 2024 11:34am
Men & woman need to understand one another. Most of the time ego's take over and a battle follows. Communication is everything.
Great piece of writing here.
Great piece of writing here.
