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Was it something I said?

 

You are too much.
Yours will not do.
Be quiet, hush.
What is wrong with you?

What did I tell you?
Are you blind or something?
Get out of the way, shoo.
Are you good for nothing?

Just do what I say.
Go faster, slow down.
That's the wrong way.
Quit fooling around.

You never listen.
You had better change.
Be glad I have forgiven.
How many times do I have to say?

I can't believe she left.
Was it something that I said?

ARM
Written by AprylNovember (A.R.M.)
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Author's Note
I had a boyfriend once who criticized me every day and all day long. Then was totally shocked when I broke up with him. He thought we had a great relationship. Lol
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