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after all
the street is wet and windy
the very pavement slabs uneven with
you holding my hand I still worry
I might fall and take you with me
Published 21st Nov 2024
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21st Nov 2024 2:50pm
Self-discovery while still falling in love. Learning the act of being and forgiving ourselves our mistakes while someone else holds our hand. The world being a frightening place to traverse alone but still wanting someone at our side. In only a few lines, your poem depicts all of those experiences. Thank you for the read. Is there anything in particular you wanted feedback on?
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