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Unlock A New Point Of View
Ignorance is bliss amongst the arrogant
Always coloring outside the proper lines
Seems every person has a different slant
Beautiful flowers covered by thorny vines
Never assume in a world painted with lies
It only complicates what seems to be real
Dark clouds cluster along pale blue skies
Peaceful hearts pray for all wounds to heal
Time is a prisoner to orchestrated violence
Watching as love struggles to break through
A writers words guiding lost souls in silence
Always eager to unlock a new point of view
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Always coloring outside the proper lines
Seems every person has a different slant
Beautiful flowers covered by thorny vines
Never assume in a world painted with lies
It only complicates what seems to be real
Dark clouds cluster along pale blue skies
Peaceful hearts pray for all wounds to heal
Time is a prisoner to orchestrated violence
Watching as love struggles to break through
A writers words guiding lost souls in silence
Always eager to unlock a new point of view
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Published 10th Nov 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. Poets/Poetesses, we just built different. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" We got music in our solar system
We're space truckin' 'round the stars"
- Ian Gillan
- Damian DeadLove
" We got music in our solar system
We're space truckin' 'round the stars"
- Ian Gillan
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10th Nov 2024 10:56am
You opened up with that opening line Damian so right and the rest what followed, superb ♥️
11th Nov 2024 4:09am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
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10th Nov 2024 11:10am
This has a more spiritual viewpoint. Love the flow and how soothing & relaxing the words were & the image is great.
Love the Gillian quote. Who don't like Space Truckin, c'mon. CLASSIC!!!!!!!!
Love the Gillian quote. Who don't like Space Truckin, c'mon. CLASSIC!!!!!!!!
11th Nov 2024 4:11am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. I'm glad you connected with the write. I know, right? Phenomenal song. Appreciate you.
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10th Nov 2024 12:50pm
11th Nov 2024 4:12am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Dreamz. Appreciate you.
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10th Nov 2024 6:43pm
A RIGHTEOUS and sacred thoughts 🤔 as well as you know that it's the key 🗝️ to unlocking the deepness of the truth of the mind thoughts to unblocking a new point of view 🪟🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
11th Nov 2024 4:13am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, SHAMAN. Glad you connected with the write. Much respect, brother poet. Appreciate you.
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11th Nov 2024 3:06pm
15th Nov 2024 9:55pm
Assumptions & expectations seem to only end in heartache. This piece is very stirring...
16th Nov 2024 9:01am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
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