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Liquid Echoes Of Despair
chasing shadows lost
inside an empty shot glass
whiskey and false hope
inside an empty shot glass
whiskey and false hope
Published 1st Nov 2024
Author's Note
for the competition Beer or Alcohol Senryu/Haiku
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1st Nov 2024 9:17pm
Ooh, this is excellent, Colin.
Alcohol is complete falseness. It doesn’t solve, only destroys.
Alcohol is complete falseness. It doesn’t solve, only destroys.
2nd Nov 2024 7:37am
it does bring false hope
I used it to give courage that was only fleeting
I used it to give courage that was only fleeting
2nd Nov 2024 9:27am
Dear AP,
Been there. Your succinct ability to describe these hopes and feelings is fabulous. I wish you all the best for this comp. H🌷
Been there. Your succinct ability to describe these hopes and feelings is fabulous. I wish you all the best for this comp. H🌷
2nd Nov 2024 10:58am
