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Need I Remind You
Need I remind you,
Of 800 texts in a week.
Of you boosting me up,
When I felt meek.
Need I remind you,
You were the one
Who gave me hope.
And now you're the one having fun.
Need I remind you,
You said you'd stay away,
And I agreed the same,
And things changed the next day.
Need I remind you,
Of the night I was with her,
Playing your messenger,
And now you're happy ever after.
Need I remind you,
Of the shit I wrote for you,
Just to cheer you up,
When you were feeling blue.
And now you've got the ump,
You're really pissed,
Now you know how I feel,
How did it get to this?
Inseparable, attached at the hip,
That's how we used to be,
Now you're angry,
At little old me.
Need I remind you,
I can write what I like,
When I like,
How I like.
Need I remind you,
If you don't like what you see,
Don't log on,
And don't fucking read.
Of 800 texts in a week.
Of you boosting me up,
When I felt meek.
Need I remind you,
You were the one
Who gave me hope.
And now you're the one having fun.
Need I remind you,
You said you'd stay away,
And I agreed the same,
And things changed the next day.
Need I remind you,
Of the night I was with her,
Playing your messenger,
And now you're happy ever after.
Need I remind you,
Of the shit I wrote for you,
Just to cheer you up,
When you were feeling blue.
And now you've got the ump,
You're really pissed,
Now you know how I feel,
How did it get to this?
Inseparable, attached at the hip,
That's how we used to be,
Now you're angry,
At little old me.
Need I remind you,
I can write what I like,
When I like,
How I like.
Need I remind you,
If you don't like what you see,
Don't log on,
And don't fucking read.
Published 18th May 2012
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18th May 2012 1:16pm
*Need I remind you, If you don't like what you see, Don't log on, And don't fucking read.*
Sweet P, you have summed it up perfectly with this last stanza. Write it out, however you want, whatever you want, whenever you need. If others, who appear from all your recent submissions seem to be the cause of your sadness, anger and residual love, don't like what you say then Fuck Them. You have the exclusivity to your own thoughts and passions and it is your right to share them with whoever you want.
Thank you, as always, for sharing - I only hope that it is slowly bringing you some peace.
My love and gratitude
D xx (talk later)
Sweet P, you have summed it up perfectly with this last stanza. Write it out, however you want, whatever you want, whenever you need. If others, who appear from all your recent submissions seem to be the cause of your sadness, anger and residual love, don't like what you say then Fuck Them. You have the exclusivity to your own thoughts and passions and it is your right to share them with whoever you want.
Thank you, as always, for sharing - I only hope that it is slowly bringing you some peace.
My love and gratitude
D xx (talk later)
18th May 2012 2:39pm
D, thank you for adding in your two cents. Yes, this is written to someone who you know the story of, but just in case she reads this, I never meant for things to go this way. She meant the world to me, and that, despite all I've said, won't change. Ta Dave. Looking forward to our correspondence later :)
Anonymous
19th May 2012 2:48pm
this is really good. just remember...there r 2 sides 2 every story. enuf said on that. over 800 texts, wow. outrageous. my friends ex, the one with over 6 different user names on here sent her over 1000 and keeps texting her still n calls, form of harassment. she had to go get a print out from the phone company cause he blew up her phone. letting go is the best route and honesty as well. stories dont work well, kind of bite you in the butt, ya know? keep writing and be real.
