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Reality

gazing outside I
see myself reflected in
the dying maple

Written by Detritus

Published 25th Oct 2024

#haiku #SelfReflection

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Re. Reality

26th Oct 2024 6:33pm

You evoke strong imagery in just three lines. Excellent.

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