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river divided

i can't
see
as far
where
the clumsy
river
breaks
apart, one
directing
not to
stay with
its mother,
to strike
out on
its own,
to undo
that bond,
but saying
nothing
before
it is
half gone,
it slowed
and fell
asleep.
Written by goodwolf1966 (jimmy)
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