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deep shadows

the
shadows
in the
water
move
like fish.
goodwolf1966
Written by goodwolf1966 (jimmy)
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Re. deep shadows
23rd Oct 2024 12:00pm
Like the simple elegance of this...
LilDragonFly
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Re: Re. deep shadows
(jimmy)
23rd Oct 2024 5:58pm
thank you Lil
goodwolf1966
Re. deep shadows
23rd Oct 2024 1:16pm
I agree with LDF. This is perfect, wolf.
Her
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Re: Re. deep shadows
(jimmy)
23rd Oct 2024 5:59pm
thank you Her
goodwolf1966
Re. deep shadows
(Damian DeadLove)
24th Oct 2024 2:03am
Great write, Jimmy. Appreciate you.

DL
DamianDeadLove
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(jimmy)
24th Oct 2024 2:04am
thank you Damian
goodwolf1966
Re. deep shadows
24th Oct 2024 7:37am
Dear J,

I liked the imagery in this write. Fast moving because of its brevity but full of depth. Terrific piece. H🌷
Honoria
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Re: Re. deep shadows
(jimmy)
24th Oct 2024 7:59am
thank you Honoria
goodwolf1966

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