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My dream
Come to my dreams
someday...
I will lie in your arms
in a vast field
blanketed with verdant grass
and
dappled with white and yellow
wildflowers.
The mellowed smile of
joyous sun
enlivening the scenery
and clouds like ballerinas
gliding about
in their puffy white frocks,
telling tales of love's glory.
Cool velvety zephyr
caressing us lightly
as it breezes across,
leaving behind aroma of
past forgotten love
and of a life filled with
sweet melody.
It is then I will confess
how much I love you;
even if you don't,
there will be no escape for you
for it's my bubble you have been encased in,
which will continue to float
in the surreal world
till my dream angels dance around
But alas! Time will prick it
when morning comes
But...
Dreams do come true
Don't they?
Till then I shall be waiting for you...
someday...
I will lie in your arms
in a vast field
blanketed with verdant grass
and
dappled with white and yellow
wildflowers.
The mellowed smile of
joyous sun
enlivening the scenery
and clouds like ballerinas
gliding about
in their puffy white frocks,
telling tales of love's glory.
Cool velvety zephyr
caressing us lightly
as it breezes across,
leaving behind aroma of
past forgotten love
and of a life filled with
sweet melody.
It is then I will confess
how much I love you;
even if you don't,
there will be no escape for you
for it's my bubble you have been encased in,
which will continue to float
in the surreal world
till my dream angels dance around
But alas! Time will prick it
when morning comes
But...
Dreams do come true
Don't they?
Till then I shall be waiting for you...
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Re. My dream
22nd Oct 2024 5:48pm
Couldn't help but smile as I read this
'' even if you don't,
there will be no escape for you
for it's my bubble you have been encased in,
which will continue to float
in the surreal world
till my dream angels want
But alas! Time will prick it
when morning comes ''
I can flip this from a masculine point of view
and totally relate.
This is some surreal and extravagant ink
Diggin it!!
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22nd Oct 2024 5:50pm
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Re: Re. My dream
22nd Oct 2024 6:10pm
Love your thoughts on this...Your reviews themselves are lyrical 😊
Haha...I'm a very romantic person...very 😁
Thanks a lot for reading and leaving great comments. Your presence on my page always brings a smile on my face 😊
Haha...I'm a very romantic person...very 😁
Thanks a lot for reading and leaving great comments. Your presence on my page always brings a smile on my face 😊
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Re. My dream
22nd Oct 2024 6:22pm
Re. My dream
22nd Oct 2024 10:25pm
Re: Re. My dream
22nd Oct 2024 10:40pm
You write with so much truth and emotions and genuine trust about what is life love 💗👍✍️🙏📿🪷👏. 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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22nd Oct 2024 10:46pm
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23rd Oct 2024 1:16pm
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23rd Oct 2024 1:29pm
Re. My dream
23rd Oct 2024 1:07am
Re: Re. My dream
23rd Oct 2024 9:05am
Yes...a waking beautiful dream ❤️
Thanks a lot, dear Joe for stopping by...I know your love for wildflowers 😉
Thanks a lot, dear Joe for stopping by...I know your love for wildflowers 😉
Re: Re. My dream
23rd Oct 2024 9:13am
I do love wild flowers my friend, and this poem put them to good display 🌼
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Re. My dream
23rd Oct 2024 3:50am
Beautifully written, Dreamz. I like this a lot, love your imagery. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. My dream
23rd Oct 2024 9:06am
So happy to know that this piece appeals to you a lot. I highly appreciate your kind support ,dear poet 😊🌹
Re. My dream
24th Oct 2024 10:41am
You have caught hold of something magical with this poem.
Regards James
Regards James
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24th Oct 2024 11:02am