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My dream

Come to my dreams � � � � �
someday... � � � � �
I will lie in your arms � � � � �
in a vast field � � � � �
blanketed with verdant grass � � � �
and � � � �
dappled with white and yellow � � � � �
wildflowers. � � � � �
The mellowed smile of � � � � �
joyous sun � � � �
enlivening the scenery � � � �
and clouds like ballerinas � � � � �
gliding about � � � � �
in their puffy white frocks,
telling tales of love's glory. � � � � �
Cool velvety zephyr � � � � �
caressing us lightly � � � � �
as it breezes across, � � � � �
leaving behind aroma of � � � � �
past forgotten love � � �
and of a life filled with
sweet melody. � � �
It is then I will confess � � � � �
how much I love you; � � � � �
even if you don't, � � � � �
there will be no escape for you � � � � �
for it's my bubble you have been encased in, � � � � �
which will continue to float � � � � �
in the surreal world � � � � �
till my dream angels dance around �
But alas! Time will prick it � � � � �
when morning comes � � � � �
� � � � �
But... � � � � �
� � � � �
Dreams do come true � � � � �
Don't they? � � � � �
� � � � �
Till then I shall be waiting for you... � � � � �
� � � � �

Written by InDreamz

Published 22nd Oct 2024

#dreams #hope #love #nature

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Re. My dream

Naajir

22nd Oct 2024 5:48pm

Couldn't help but smile as I read this

'' even if you don't,
there will be no escape for you
for it's my bubble you have been encased in,
which will continue to float
in the surreal world
till my dream angels want
But alas! Time will prick it
when morning comes ''

I can flip this from a masculine point of view
and totally relate.
This is some surreal and extravagant ink

Diggin it!!

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InDreamz

22nd Oct 2024 5:50pm

Thanks a bunch ,dear poet for your kind comments. You made me happy 🌹

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Re. My dream

Timagination2

22nd Oct 2024 6:03pm

Your romantic heart is on full display in this one I. D. I can feel that warm sun as it shines down in the fluffy grass; see the clouds and flowers; and feel the touch of your skin. You've made this real and the setting is perfect. The dream-like quality you create and the sentiments bring the reader to this place and entraps them. But I don't think any man with a heart as romantic as yours will be complaining. :)

Nicely done.

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InDreamz

22nd Oct 2024 6:10pm

Love your thoughts on this...Your reviews themselves are lyrical 😊

Haha...I'm a very romantic person...very 😁

Thanks a lot for reading and leaving great comments. Your presence on my page always brings a smile on my face 😊

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