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Paradise, when one dies
So your mom died
now shes in paradise
where families reunite
never again terrorized
Thats what you tell
But why do you cry?
As if a cello's depressing whine
On an event clearly of joy
blessed are those who mourn
A make yourself feel better
Cliche full of shit.
now shes in paradise
where families reunite
never again terrorized
Thats what you tell
But why do you cry?
As if a cello's depressing whine
On an event clearly of joy
blessed are those who mourn
A make yourself feel better
Cliche full of shit.
Published 17th May 2012
| Edited 28th May 2012
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27th May 2012 7:45pm
nicely
paradoxymoronic....(think mayhaps should eliminate the comma after 'better' in nex2'last line)
paradoxymoronic....(think mayhaps should eliminate the comma after 'better' in nex2'last line)
28th May 2012 2:37am
PARADOXYMORONICS is a delusion of my overstimulated creative consciousness which seemed to come about as th'result of somekinda brain damage incurred in 2000 AD when my Heart was unbeating during many hours of surgery that was thought by many involved 'to be the end of Me'... & from a certain perspective, perverse tho many 'think' it to be, It indeed Was The End of Me - or at least whatever 'me' might have been in the last 1/2 of the 20th century....
a fascinating tale of The Dubious Nature of Reality
a fascinating tale of The Dubious Nature of Reality
28th May 2012 2:41am
Havent got a chance to know the old you but I'm sure glad the new YOU is alive and kicking PARADOXYMORONICS
