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Your Gaze

Your Gaze
 
Drives me crazy
I can’t step into my life but yeah
 
Stare into to you  
You drive me crazy
 
Scoop it up and serve it back to you  
Your gaze drives me crazy
Leaves me anything less than lazy
 
Feel your vibe and I reciprocate  
It’s your gaze that leaves me raptured  
 
Like a picture on asphalt I see right through your soul  
I see a gaze in your eyes
But I’m a flame you haven’t seen  
 
Gaze back into my eyes  
I’ll gaze at you with our destiny  
 
I’m in love and you’re feeling the same thing  
 
Feel like a little kid back when we made it all up
You froze me with your smile and I can’t deny
 
That I feel the same I thought this would work out like this
I planned it all in my heart
 
Thought about what I can do
But all I can be is me to you
 
Written by oldmanG
Published | Edited 4th Nov 2024
Author's Note
Here is a raw demo of the song

https://on.soundcloud.com/RgxRxmZKdBB37DqQ9
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